自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了父母教你骑车和在公园练习，内容有一定细节。建议删去重复的“First, at the beginning”，把“write it”改为“ride it”，并使用正确表达“After a few tries”。回答需要用完整句子结束，不要以“and”悬空；可补充学会骑车后的感受。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, but I couldn’t ride it at first. They patiently taught me, and I practised in the park. After a few tries, I was able to ride it on my own, which made me feel really proud.

建議: 你直接表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，也提到很多人骑车上班以及自己的经历。主要问题是“they it's good for education”语法和意思不清楚；如果想表达骑车有益健康，可以说“cycling is good for people’s health”。建议用“because”连接原因，并用一两个具体细节说明骑车为何受欢迎。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people cycle to work because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities. Cycling is also good for people’s health. I often ride my bike to work, too.

× Few a few times I could write it, and

✓ A few times, I could write it.

“Few a few times”重复且量词搭配错误。表示“几次”时，应使用“a few times”；“few”单独使用通常表示“几乎没有”。句末的“and”也没有连接后续内容，因此应删除。

× Many people ride bikes to work and they it's good for education and now I often ride bikes to work.

✓ Many people ride bikes to work, and they think it's good for education. Now I often ride bikes to work.

“they it's good”把主语“they”和另一句中的“it's good”直接拼接在一起，缺少连接二者的谓语。补上“think”后，结构变为“they think it's good”。原句还用多个“and”连接完整意思不同的内容，拆成两句会更清楚。