自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你只是重复了考官的问题，没有给出自己的回答。请先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车地点或学骑车的经历。注意说“when you were a child”，不能漏掉冠词“a”。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 回答与问题相关的内容不足：“I used to have a bag”可能想表达“我小时候有一辆自行车”，而“when I were”应改为“when I was”。请明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎，并给出具体原因或例子。句子也没有说完；尽量用完整、简洁的句子结束回答。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live near their workplaces. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around. When I was a child, I enjoyed riding my bike with my friends.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”，所以说“a child”。

× I think maybe yes, to be honest, I used to have a bag when I were a child.

✓ I think maybe yes, to be honest, I used to have a bag when I was a child.

主语是“I”，过去时中应搭配“was”，而不是“were”。建议记住：过去时中“I/he/she/it”通常搭配“was”，“you/we/they”搭配“were”。

× I thought riding back was very interesting and.

✓ I thought riding back was very interesting.

句子以并列连词“and”结尾，但后面没有接续的并列内容，导致句子结构不完整。若没有后续内容，应删去“and”。