自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用过去时说明是谁送的，并补充一个具体细节。注意谈论童年时用过去时，例如“when I was a child”；“very like”应改为“really liked”，而单数的“a bike”后面应使用“it”，不要用“them”。

範例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a beautiful bike when I was a child, and I really liked it. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建議: 先明确回答自行车现在是否受欢迎，再提供具体原因或例子。避免重复“I’m”，并注意语法：应说“我出生在中国”（I was born in China）；“bikes”是复数，搭配“are”；谈论现在的情况可用“are popular”，不要用不清楚的“In the old years”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips. Many people also use shared bikes in cities.

× Yes, of course, because when I'm a child my father gave me a beautiful bike, so I very like them.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, my father gave me a beautiful bike, and I really liked it.

这句话描述童年时发生的事情，因此应使用过去时。把“I'm”改为“was”，把“like”改为“liked”，与“gave”保持时态一致。

× I very like them.

✓ I really liked it.

“Very”通常不能直接修饰动词“like”。可以用“really”修饰“like”，或说“like it very much”。此处用过去时“liked”符合童年经历的语境。

× I very like them.

✓ I really liked it.

“Them”指复数事物，但前文的“a beautiful bike”是单数，因此应使用单数代词“it”。

× Sure, because I'm I'm born in China and. In the old years bike are popular in from China and lots of people buy it.

✓ Sure. I was born in China. In the past, bikes were popular in China, and lots of people bought them.

句子谈到出生以及过去的情况，应使用过去时：“I'm born”改为“I was born”，“are”改为“were”，“buy”改为“bought”。

× In the old years bike are popular in from China and lots of people buy it.

✓ In the past, bikes were popular in China, and lots of people bought them.

这里泛指自行车，应用复数“bikes”；后文代指这些自行车时也要用复数代词“them”，不能用单数“it”。

× bike are popular

✓ Bikes were popular.

复数主语“bikes”应搭配复数形式“were”。同时，这里描述过去的情况，所以用“were”而不是“are”。

× popular in from China

✓ popular in China

表示“在中国受欢迎”时用“in China”即可。“In”和“from”不能在这里连用；“from China”表示“来自中国”。