自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use the past tense consistently: say “I had,” not “I do have.” Replace “in pink color” with “pink” and “my everyone” with “everyone.” Break the long sentence into shorter, connected ideas, and explain briefly why the bike was special to you.

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. It had a basket at the front, and my maternal uncle bought it for me after I passed eighth grade. I loved it, and my friends were quite envious of it.

建議: Answer directly and use the plural “bikes” when speaking generally. Replace the unclear phrase “the very first means of transportation” with a specific reason, such as affordability or convenience. Clarify the contrast between private cars and public transport, and use “modes” with “one of the.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient, and not everyone can afford a car. They are also useful for short trips when public transport is crowded.

× When I was a child I do have a bike

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike

The sentence refers to a period in the past, so use the past-tense verb had, not do have. Use the simple past to describe a possession you had as a child.

× it was in pink color

✓ it was pink

The preposition in is not needed before a color in this expression. Say it was pink, or it was pink in color.

× that was the beautiful bicycle

✓ that was a beautiful bicycle

Use a, not the, when introducing a singular countable noun that has not already been identified as a specific one. The indefinite article a is appropriate here.

× my everyone used to envy that

✓ everyone used to envy it

My cannot be used before everyone. Everyone already functions as the subject pronoun, so remove my. It is also a more suitable pronoun than that when referring back to the bicycle.

× I do think bike are popular in my country

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country

The plural verb are requires a plural subject here. Use bikes rather than the singular bike when making a general statement about bicycles.

× the very first means of transportation in my country is bicycle

✓ the very first means of transportation in my country is the bicycle

Bicycle is a singular countable noun and needs an article. The is suitable when referring to the bicycle as a general means of transportation.

× Every person does not have access to their private car and private vehicles public vehicles.

✓ Not everyone has access to a private car or to public transportation.

The original sentence has an unclear negative construction and joins private vehicles and public vehicles without a grammatical connection. Use not everyone for the intended meaning and connect the alternatives with or.

× one of the safest and easiest mode of transportation

✓ one of the safest and easiest modes of transportation

After one of the, the noun must be plural because one item is being selected from a group. Use modes, not mode.