自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or memory. Avoid repeating words and correct the unnatural phrases: say “riding it,” not “writing it,” and “it made me feel excited.” Your response trails off, so finish the idea and keep it to a few complete sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was in elementary school, and I was thrilled. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with a complete explanation. Use “bicycles” or “bikes” consistently, and say “Japan has many hills” rather than “it has many hills.” Complete your final thought by explaining how electric bikes help people, and avoid fillers such as “like.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially electric bikes. Many areas have steep hills, so an electric bike makes it easier to get around than a regular one. They’re particularly useful for commuting and carrying shopping.

× Every time I was writing it made me so much excited.

✓ Every time I rode it, it made me so excited.

Use the simple past rode for a repeated action in the past. Was writing is a progressive form and does not fit this habitual meaning. In this context, writing also appears to be a mistaken word for riding.

× It made me so much excited.

✓ It made me so excited.

Excited is an adjective, so use so to modify it. Much does not normally modify this adjective in this construction.

× Uh, personally, I think it is.

✓ Uh, personally, I think they are.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural, so use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are rather than it is.

× When it comes to bike, I think electric bicycle is more popular than like a regular bicycle.

✓ When it comes to bikes, I think electric bicycles are more popular than regular bicycles.

Use the plural bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Keep the comparison parallel by using plural forms for both types: electric bicycles and regular bicycles. Remove like here because it is an unnecessary filler, not part of the comparison.