自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, and use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I do have.” Add one specific detail, such as how you used the bike or who gave it to you.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and my parents bought it for my birthday.

建議: Use the plural “bikes” and avoid calling people who ride bikes “pedestrians”; pedestrians are people walking. Explain that bikes are popular for commuting, recreation, or environmental reasons. Use a clear linking word such as “because,” avoid repeating words, and finish your answer instead of trailing off. Keep the response to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people cycle to work or school because it is affordable and helps reduce traffic and air pollution. The government also promotes cycling as a greener way to travel.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, and the clause when I was a child also refers to the past. Use the past-tense auxiliary did instead of do. Match the tense of your answer to the time being discussed.

× Yes, I think bike is popular in our country because most of the pedestrians use it rather than commuting with four-wheel cars and our country promotes things against global warming.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because most of the pedestrians use them rather than commuting with four-wheel cars and our country promotes things against global warming.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The verb must also be plural (are), and the pronoun referring to bikes must be them rather than it. For general statements, check that the noun, verb, and pronoun agree in number.