自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容切题，也提到了自行车的颜色和辅助轮，但需要改进时态、名词和动词搭配。谈过去的经历时，应将“have”改为“had”，并说“when I was a kid”；“wells”应为“wheels”，这里更准确的说法是“training wheels”；“help me keeping”应改为“help me keep”。减少“uh”等填充词，并用一两句完整的话表达即可。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a blue bike when I was a kid, and it had training wheels to help me keep my balance.

建議: 开头直接回答了问题，也给出了健康这一理由，但“社会快速发展”与自行车受欢迎之间的联系不够清楚。“more and more people thinking has improvement”语法不正确，可改为“more and more people are becoming health-conscious”。建议删去“you know”，并补充具体例子，例如人们骑车通勤或锻炼；同时使用“because”或“for example”让理由更连贯。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. More people are becoming health-conscious, and cycling is an easy way to exercise. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use shared bikes for short trips.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，使用一般过去时“Did you have...?”回答时应使用助动词“did”，不能用现在完成时的“have”。回答过去时的一般疑问句时，可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”

× Actually, my parents bought a blue bike for me when I was kid.

✓ Actually, my parents bought a blue bike for me when I was a kid.

“kid”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a kid”。记住：单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。

× The bike have two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.

✓ The bike has two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.

主语“The bike”是第三人称单数，一般现在时的谓语动词“have”应变为“has”。注意第三人称单数主语后，动词通常要加“-s”或“-es”。

× The bike have two extra wells that can help me keeping, keep balance.

✓ The bike have two extra wells that can help me keep balance.

“help + 人”后面通常接动词原形，因此应说“help me keep”，不能说“help me keeping”。口语中的“keeping”是未完成的自我修正，整理答案时应删去。

× With the rapid development of society, you know, more and more people thinking has improvement.

✓ With the rapid development of society, you know, more and more people's thinking has improved.

原句的主语结构不完整。“people thinking”应改为表示所属关系的“people's thinking”；此外，“has”后应接动词的过去分词，表达“已经改善”时应说“has improved”，不能使用名词“improvement”。