自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了“Yes”，但后半句与问题的时间和内容不够清楚：“that”指什么？如果你小时候有自行车，请说明它是否适合儿童，并补充一个具体细节，例如颜色、骑车地点或使用频率。

範例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 请围绕“自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎”直接作答。原回答中的“at the 80s channel”和“for walking”表达不清，也从自行车转到了汽车。可以说明哪些人常骑自行车、通常在哪里骑，或将自行车与汽车作简短比较，并使用清晰的连接词。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are convenient for short trips, and they help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, at the 80s channel everybody will buy a car when they become adults for walking.

✓ Yes, in the 80s, everybody bought a car when they became an adult.

表示“在20世纪80年代”时，时间介词应使用 in，而不是 at。建议记住：表示年份、月份或年代时通常用 in。

× Yes, at the 80s channel everybody will buy a car when they become adults for walking.

✓ Yes, in the 80s, everybody bought a car when they became an adult.

句子提到的是过去的“20世纪80年代”，所以描述当时的行为应使用过去时 bought；when 引导的时间从句也应使用过去时 became。注意，everybody 通常视为单数，因此可说 when everybody became an adult。