自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再给出一到两个清楚、合理的原因。注意这里应使用“bike”，而不是“bag”；“买不起”可以说“couldn't afford one”。避免使用意思不清的“offer me a child”，并用过去时描述童年经历。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, and I didn’t really need it because I usually walked to school.

建議: 先明确表达现在的看法，例如用“Yes, I think…”或“No, I don’t think…”，不要用过去时“didn't think”谈现在的情况。删除不完整的“because”句，并准确说明比较对象；可以解释汽车更受欢迎的原因，或补充自行车在某些人群中的用途。

範例: I don’t think bikes are as popular as cars in my country. Many people prefer cars because they’re more convenient for long journeys and bad weather. However, bikes are still common for short trips, especially among students.

× I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my family can't offer me a child.

✓ I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my family couldn't offer me a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，时间背景是过去，因此这里的情态动词也应使用过去形式 couldn't，而不是 can't。

× I didn't need a bike because I always walk to school.

✓ I didn't need a bike because I always walked to school.

句子的时间背景是过去（didn't need），所以表示当时经常发生的动作也应使用过去时 walked，而不是现在时 walk。

× I didn't think the bike is popular in my country because.

✓ I don't think the bike is popular in my country.

问题询问的是现在的看法，因此应使用现在时 don't think，而不是过去时 didn't think。

× I didn't think the bike is popular in my country because.

✓ I don't think the bike is popular in my country.

because 引导原因从句，后面必须接完整的原因内容。原句在 because 后没有补充原因，结构不完整；如果没有要说明的原因，应删除 because。

× In my age.

✓ At my age.

表示“在我这个年龄”时，英语通常使用介词 at，不能说 in my age。

× 20th century 21st century is popular.

✓ In the 21st century, cars are more popular than bikes.

原句缺少清楚的句子结构，而且没有明确说明“什么东西受欢迎”。结合后面的比较句，可以补上时间状语和明确的主语，使表达成为完整句子。

× The car is popular more than the bike.

✓ The car is more popular than the bike.

形容词 popular 的比较级结构是 more popular。more 应放在形容词前面，构成 more popular than，不能放在 popular 后面。