自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答有回应问题，但后半句语法和表达不清楚，听者难以判断你想说什么。请用过去时说明父亲给你买了什么样的自行车，并补充一个具体细节，例如你常在哪里骑或骑车时的感受。注意用“a bike that my dad bought for me”表达“爸爸给我买的自行车”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red one that my dad bought for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答直接，也提到了共享单车，但“use the bike as our vehicle”不够自然，而且“bicycle”应使用复数。可以说明自行车为什么受欢迎，并举出共享单车或通勤的具体例子。尽量减少“Umm”等填充词。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and help them avoid traffic.

× Yes, of course I remember that it's a ride bike which which my dad better for me.

✓ Yes, of course. I remember that it was a bike that my dad bought for me.

这句话描述的是童年时的自行车，属于过去的事情，因此应将“it's”改为过去式“it was”。“better”在这里应为“bought”（buy 的过去式），表示爸爸当时给我买了自行车。回答过去经历时，注意使用过去时态。

× Yes, of course. Umm, we usually use the bike as our vehicle and we have a lot of shared bicycle.

✓ Yes, of course. Umm, we usually use bikes as our vehicles, and we have a lot of shared bicycles.

“a lot of”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“bicycle”应改为“bicycles”。这里泛指人们通常使用的自行车和交通工具，用复数“bikes”和“vehicles”更合适。注意可数名词在表示多个事物时通常需要加复数词尾。