自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the past tense: say “I didn’t have” rather than “I do not have.” Replace “due to I” with “because,” and avoid repeating the idea that you were small. Give one clear, specific reason.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one at the time. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike, though.

建議: Start with a clear answer, then support it with one or two relevant details. Avoid repeating “my country,” and correct the grammar: use “many people love” and “most people use.” Be specific about the types of bikes or why people ride them.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or commuting, while some teenagers enjoy sports bikes. You can also see ordinary bicycles on the roads, especially in busy cities.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child due to I when I was small I was not having that much money to buy the bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I did not have enough money to buy one.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the simple past did not have rather than do not have. Have is generally not used in the past progressive to describe possession, so I was not having is also incorrect here. Use did not have. To improve, identify the time frame in the question and keep the verbs consistent with it.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child due to I when I was small I was not having that much money to buy the bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I did not have enough money to buy one.

Due to is followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a complete clause such as I did not have enough money. Use because to introduce a clause. For example, say because I did not have enough money or due to a lack of money.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child due to I when I was small I was not having that much money to buy the bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I did not have enough money to buy a bike.

The bike refers to a bike that has not been mentioned before, so the definite article the is not appropriate. Use a bike when referring to one unspecified bike. Use the only when the listener knows which particular bike you mean.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in my country, in my home country because every teenager has a dream to buy the bike as well as the many other people loves bike riding and there are most of the people use like sports bike as well as the normal bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in my country because every teenager dreams of buying a bike, many other people love riding bikes, and most people use sports bikes as well as regular bikes.

In this general statement, the bike refers to no previously identified bike, so use a bike. Also, use an article-free plural form for general categories, such as sports bikes and regular bikes. Use a or an for one nonspecific singular item, and the for a specific item already known to the listener.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in my country, in my home country because every teenager has a dream to buy the bike as well as the many other people loves bike riding and there are most of the people use like sports bike as well as the normal bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in my country because every teenager dreams of buying a bike, many other people love riding bikes, and most people use sports bikes as well as regular bikes.

People is plural, so it must take the plural verb love, not loves. Match the verb to its subject: a singular subject takes a singular verb, and a plural subject takes a plural verb.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in my country, in my home country because every teenager has a dream to buy the bike as well as the many other people loves bike riding and there are most of the people use like sports bike as well as the normal bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in my country because every teenager dreams of buying a bike, many other people love riding bikes, and most people use sports bikes as well as regular bikes.

There are cannot be followed by most of the people use in this construction. There is or there are introduces the existence of something, as in There are many bikes. To state what people do, use the direct subject and verb: Most people use sports bikes.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in my country, in my home country because every teenager has a dream to buy the bike as well as the many other people loves bike riding and there are most of the people use like sports bike as well as the normal bike.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in my country because every teenager dreams of buying a bike, many other people love riding bikes, and most people use sports bikes as well as regular bikes.

The statement refers to types of bikes in general, so use the plural forms sports bikes and regular bikes. Use a singular noun when referring to one bike and a plural noun when referring to bikes generally or to more than one.