自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question is about your childhood. “I have replied” does not fit the meaning here. Add one specific detail, such as who bought the bike or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a red one, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: Start with a clear answer, such as “Yes, they’re very popular.” Use “country,” not “countries,” and avoid repeating the same idea. Explain the reason with one specific detail, and finish the comparison introduced by “instead of.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many families own at least one because cycling is an affordable way to get around. You can see people riding them on city streets, especially for short journeys instead of driving.

× Yes, I have replied when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a completed period in the past, so use the past tense had rather than the present perfect have replied. The verb replied also does not express owning a bike. Answer directly with Yes, I did, or say Yes, I had a bike.

× Nowadays bikes and are very common in my countries

✓ Nowadays, bikes are very common in my country.

The speaker appears to be referring to one country, so use the singular country rather than countries. Use the singular form when referring to your own country unless you mean more than one country.

× Nowadays bikes and are very common in my countries

✓ Nowadays, bikes are very common in my country.

The word and incorrectly interrupts the subject bikes and its verb are. Do not add a conjunction unless it connects two complete or coordinated ideas. A clear pattern is subject + verb + complement: Bikes are very common.

× in every house is they have security and bikes

✓ Every household has security and bikes.

The original clause combines incompatible structures: in every house is and they have. Use one clear subject and verb. For example, Every household has bikes.

× There is no house we do not have bikes

✓ There is no house that does not have bikes.

The relative clause needs a subject that refers to house. Add that and use does not to agree with the singular noun house. This means that every house has bikes.

× when we are in the road

✓ when we are on the road

The usual preposition for being on a road or traveling along it is on, not in. Use on the road in this context.

× everyone likes to ride bikes instead of

✓ Everyone likes to ride bikes.

Instead of normally needs a following noun or an -ing verb, such as instead of driving. Since no alternative is provided, end the sentence after bikes or complete the comparison with the intended alternative.