自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接回应了问题，也提到了和朋友一起骑车的经历，但多处关键词发音或用词不清，例如“back”应为“bike”，“run”应为“ride”。注意过去时态：用“had”而不是“have”，并避免重复和填充词“um”。可以补充一个具体细节，让回答更自然。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I actually had a few different ones as I grew up. In my free time, I’d ride around the neighbourhood with my friends.

建議: 先明确回答“bikes are popular”，并注意“bags”应为“bikes”，“write”应为“ride”。“everyone knows”后面的表达不够自然；可以说明人们骑自行车的原因或用途。注意主谓和时态一致，例如描述普遍情况时用“they learn”，不必改成“they learned”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children learn to ride them when they’re young, and adults often use them for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I definitely have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I definitely had a back when I was a child.

句子说的是童年时的经历，且从句使用了过去时“was”，所以主句中的“have”也应改为过去式“had”，以保持时态一致。

× When I um when I have spare time, I would run my back to to hang out with my friends.

✓ When I, um, when I had spare time, I would run my back to to hang out with my friends.

这里用“would”描述过去常做的事情，因此表示“有空”也应使用过去式“had”，而不是现在时“have”。

× Yes, I think bags are very popular since everyone knows how to write bags and also they learn how to write models when they were young.

✓ Yes, I think bags are very popular since everyone knows how to write bags and also they learned how to write models when they were young.

“when they were young”指过去的时间，因此描述当时学会某事的动词应使用过去式“learned”，而不是现在时“learn”。