自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并补充一两个具体细节。注意表达应为“我妈妈给我买了自行车”（bought it for me），而不是“从我这里买”（bought it from me）；骑车应使用 rode，不是 wrote。还要检查句子完整性和时间表达，例如说明你多大时得到自行车。

範例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was about ten. I often rode it to the park with my classmates, and it was one of my favorite things to do.

建議: 回答没有回应自行车在中国是否流行，后面的历史和贫穷相关内容也不清楚。请先明确表达“很流行”或“不太流行”，再用一两个相关原因或例子支持观点，例如共享单车、通勤或城市交通。避免加入难以理解或与问题无关的内容。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in China. In many cities, people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. They’re also useful for getting to a bus or subway station.

× Yes, I had back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

这里的 had 后面缺少宾语。上下文中用 one 指代前面提到的自行车，句子才完整。

× My mother bought it from me when I was 16.

✓ My mother bought it for me when I was 16.

如果想表达“妈妈给我买了自行车”，应使用 for me。Bought it from me 表示“从我这里买走”，意思不同。

× I often wrote it to the park to go to school with my classmate, which was one of my favorite activities.

✓ I often rode it to the park or to school with my classmate, which was one of my favorite activities.

这里表达过去骑自行车，ride 的过去式是 rode；wrote 是 write 的过去式，意思是“写”。

× You know China, it's about 4040 years ago.

✓ You know, China is about 4,040 years old.

原句用逗号连接两个完整句子，结构不正确；另外，表示某事物有多少年历史时用 years old，而不是 years ago。

× Later it's very poor country, every person.

✓ Later, it was a very poor country, and everyone was poor.

country 是可数单数名词，前面需要加不定冠词 a。

× Later it's very poor country, every person.

✓ Later, it was a very poor country, and everyone was poor.

这段话是在描述过去的情况，因此应将 is 改为过去式 was。

× Later it's very poor country, every person.

✓ Later, it was a very poor country, and everyone was poor.

every person 是一个没有谓语动词的片段。可以补上 was poor，或改用 everyone was poor，使表达成为完整句子。