自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并保持过去时态一致，例如用“had”。接着补充一个具体细节，如父母带你去哪里练习、你练习骑车的频率或感受。避免重复“would”，并将“we were practice”改为“we would practise”或“we practised”。

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My parents often took me to a park in the evening so I could practise riding it. I remember feeling excited when I finally learned to ride without help.

建議: 观点明确，也提供了共享单车和地铁站这一相关例子。建议删掉“Pi”和重复的“ride a”，并将“share bikes”改为更自然的“shared bikes”。用一个简洁的连接词说明共享单车的用途，并把“not just walk walking”改为自然表达，例如“instead of walking the whole way”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. You can usually find them near subway stations, so they’re a convenient way to get to your final destination instead of walking the whole way.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题类型5：过去时错误。考官问的是“小时候是否有自行车”，指过去的情况，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在时 have。

× When I was at my kindergarten...

✓ When I was in kindergarten...

问题类型11：介词使用错误。表示“上幼儿园／在幼儿园时期”时，通常说 in kindergarten，而不是 at my kindergarten。

× ...and we were practice.

✓ ...and we were practicing.

问题类型8：动词-ing形式错误。过去进行时的结构是“was/were + 动词-ing”，所以 were 后面应使用 practicing，不能直接接动词原形 practice。

× There are a lot of share bikes near the subway station.

✓ There are a lot of shared bikes near the subway station.

问题类型9：过去分词形式错误。这里 shared 用作形容词，表示“共享的”，应使用动词 share 的过去分词形式 shared。

× ...not just walk walking.

✓ ...instead of just walking.

问题类型8：动词-ing形式错误。instead of 后面应接名词或动名词，因此应使用 walking。避免把 walk 和 walking 两种形式连续重复使用。