自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了小时候有一辆小自行车，但后两句有明显的语法和表达问题。应说“enjoyed riding a bike”，而“my sport enlightened”意思不清楚，可以改为说明骑车让你感到开心或自由。补充一个具体细节，例如常在哪里骑车或和谁一起骑，会让回答更自然、更完整。

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood because it made me feel free. I often rode it with my friends after school.

建議: 你明确表达了自行车很受欢迎，也尝试给出理由，但“a popular tool”“full of benefits under convenience”和“Majority of people will buy bicycles”不够自然，且最后一句对大多数人的概括过于绝对。可以使用“a popular way to get around”“convenient and affordable”等更贴切的表达，并说明哪些人会使用自行车以及原因。注意泛指时通常说“bikes”或“bicycles”，而不是单数“bicycle”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re convenient and affordable, and they’re useful for short trips. Many people also ride them to avoid traffic or get some exercise.

× I enjoyed ride bicycle because bicycle is my sport enlightened.

✓ I enjoyed riding a bicycle because cycling was my favorite sport.

“enjoy”后面应接动词-ing形式，所以应说“enjoyed riding”，不能说“enjoyed ride”。请记住：enjoy + 动词-ing。

× I enjoyed ride bicycle because bicycle is my sport enlightened.

✓ I enjoyed riding a bicycle because cycling was my favorite sport.

“bicycle”是可数名词单数，泛指一辆自行车时前面需要加冠词“a”。修改时用了“a bicycle”。

× I enjoyed ride bicycle because bicycle is my sport enlightened.

✓ I enjoyed riding a bicycle because cycling was my favorite sport.

“enlightened”通常形容受到启发或有见识的人，不适合表达“我最喜欢的运动”。可以用“favorite sport”表达“最喜欢的运动”。

× In my opinion, bicycle is a popular tool because it is full of benefits under convenience too.

✓ In my opinion, a bicycle is a popular tool because it offers many benefits and is convenient.

“bicycle”是可数名词单数，泛指时要加冠词“a”。因此应说“a bicycle”，不能说“bicycle is”。

× In my opinion, bicycle is a popular tool because it is full of benefits under convenience too.

✓ In my opinion, a bicycle is a popular tool because it offers many benefits and is convenient.

“under convenience”不是正确的英语表达。要表达“有很多好处而且很方便”，可以说“offers many benefits and is convenient”。注意用“and”连接两个并列优点。

× Majority of people will buy bicycles.

✓ The majority of people buy bicycles.

固定表达是“the majority of + 名词”，表示“大多数……”，其中“majority”前通常需要加定冠词“the”。

× Majority of people will buy bicycles.

✓ The majority of people buy bicycles.

这里是在谈论本国目前的普遍情况，而不是预测未来，因此用一般现在时“buy”更合适。描述普遍事实或习惯时，通常使用一般现在时。