自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再按时间顺序补充经历。注意表达“带辅助轮的小自行车”可以说“a small bike with training wheels”；“两轮自行车”应说“a two-wheeled bike”，不要说“A2 wheeled like bike”。删去不完整的“and little”，并减少“uh”等填充词，让句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I did. I started with a small bike with training wheels, and later I learned to ride a two-wheeled bike on my own. I remember feeling excited because it gave me a sense of independence.

建議: 回答时注意主谓一致：谈论自行车时用“they are popular”。表达“更倾向于选择低碳生活方式”可说“are choosing a low-carbon lifestyle”，而不是“more like to chasing”。说明人们骑车通勤时用“ride bikes to commute”，避免重复“commute”。可以补充一个具体原因，如减少排放或避开交通拥堵。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. More people are choosing a low-carbon lifestyle, so they ride bikes to work or school. Cycling is also a convenient way to avoid traffic jams.

× Yeah, I did, uh, first I had a small bike with training wheels and little.

✓ Yeah, I did. First, I had a small bike with training wheels when I was little.

原句中的“and little”没有构成完整、清晰的语法结构。这里可用“when I was little”表达“我小时候”，并将两个完整意思分开，句子会更清楚。

× I learned how to ride A2 wheeled like bike on my own.

✓ I learned how to ride a two-wheeled bike on my own.

“A2 wheeled like bike”不是正确的英语结构。表示“两个轮子的自行车”时，应使用“a two-wheeled bike”；“two-wheeled”作为复合形容词放在名词“bike”前。

× Yes, I think it's very popular because nowadays people are, uh, more like to chasing for a low carbon dioxide lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular because nowadays people are more likely to pursue a low-carbon lifestyle.

“be likely to”中的“to”是不定式标记，后面应接动词原形，因此不能说“to chasing”。应改为“to pursue”。另外，“more like”在这里不能表达“更有可能”，应使用“more likely”。

× So more and more people try, uh, be start to ride a bike to commute commute.

✓ So more and more people try to start riding a bike to commute.

“try”后可接“to + 动词原形”，因此应说“try to start”，不能说“try be start”。“start”后可接动名词“riding”。末尾重复的“commute”应删除。