自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车；你可能想表达“后面有一个儿童座椅”，可以说 *a child seat at the back*。注意使用过去时描述童年经历，例如 *bought*，并避免重复或不完整的表达（如 *The the back*）。可以补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你常骑去哪里，或你为什么喜欢它。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had a little seat at the back, so my mum could take me for rides. I loved it because it was comfortable and fun.

建議: 开头的 *No, in no time* 不符合这里的意思，可以直接说 *Not really* 或 *No, not very much*。用 *Cars are more popular than bikes* 表达汽车更受欢迎；注意说 *people use cars to get to work*。最后一句关于去健身房的意思不清楚，建议删掉或换成相关的具体原因，例如通勤距离远、道路不适合骑车。

範例: Not really. Cars are much more popular in my country because many people use them to get to work. Also, some people find cycling inconvenient, especially when they have to travel long distances.

× Yes, I had a back where was a chair.

✓ Yes, I had a back where there was a chair.

表示“某处有某物”时，英语通常使用 there be 结构。原句的 where 从句中缺少 there，应改为 where there was a chair。

× The the back is very nice.

✓ The back was very nice.

这里是在描述童年时拥有的自行车，语境是过去，因此应将 is 改为 was。口语中重复的 the 也应删去。

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

句子谈论的是小时候的自行车，动作发生在过去，因此应使用过去式 liked，而不是现在式 like。

× My country is very like car.

✓ People in my country really like cars.

根据上下文，学生想表达的是“我们国家的人喜欢汽车”。原句把 my country 当作 like 的主语，并使用了不合适的结构。可用 People in my country 作主语、like 作谓语来表达这个意思。

× People usually use car to get work.

✓ People usually use cars to get to work.

这里泛指人们通常使用的汽车，应使用复数 cars，不能用单数 car。

× People usually use car to get work.

✓ People usually use cars to get to work.

表示“去上班”时应说 get to work，work 前需要介词 to。

× If you want to get gym sports, you can buy cars.

✓ If you want to go to the gym to play sports, you can buy a car.

get gym sports 不是表达“去健身房做运动”的合适句子结构。可以用 go to the gym to play sports。这里说一个人可以买一辆车时，用 a car 更合适。