自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答与问题相关，但语法错误较多，且句子没有说完。注意使用过去时（如“I had”），并用“bought me a bike”表达“给我买了一辆自行车”。可以先直接回答，再补充年龄、学习骑车后的感受；控制在一至两句，避免重复“I find”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was six, and I was excited to learn how to ride it.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了公共自行车和价格方面的细节。注意主谓一致和名词复数，例如“bikes are popular”“public bikes”；“everywhere in the road”可改为“all over the streets”，“read a public bike”应为“ride/use a public bike”。还可以用“because”清楚连接原因。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see public bikes all over the streets, and many people use them because they are affordable and convenient.

× Yes, I do have like in my childhood, which is my daddy bought to me when I was six years old once I learned how to write back I find I find it is very interesting and

✓ Yes, I had one in my childhood. My dad bought it for me when I was six years old. Once I learned how to ride it, I found it very interesting.

这段话讲的是童年经历，应使用过去时。“do have”应改为“had”，“I find”应改为“I found”。回答过去发生的事情时，注意将相关动词保持在过去时。

× Yes, I do have like in my childhood, which is my daddy bought to me when I was six years old once I learned how to write back I find I find it is very interesting and

✓ Yes, I had one in my childhood. My dad bought it for me when I was six years old. Once I learned how to ride it, I found it very interesting.

“which is my daddy bought to me”把不合适的关系从句结构和完整句子连在了一起，导致句子结构不完整。可拆成独立句：“My dad bought it for me”。描述学会骑车时，可说“learned how to ride it”。

× Yes, I do have like in my childhood, which is my daddy bought to me when I was six years old once I learned how to write back I find I find it is very interesting and

✓ My dad bought it for me when I was six years old.

表示“为某人买某物”时，通常说“buy something for someone”，所以这里应使用“for me”，而不是“to me”。

× Yes, it's very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our country.

问题中的“bikes”是复数，因此用代词“they”指代，并搭配“are”。回答时要让代词的数与它所指代的名词一致。

× You can see public bike everywhere in the road

✓ You can see public bikes everywhere on the road.

“everywhere”表示到处可以看到不止一辆公共自行车，因此这里应使用复数“bikes”。描述车辆在道路上时，通常说“on the road”。

× You can see public bike everywhere in the road

✓ You can see public bikes everywhere on the road.

表示车辆在道路上时，通常用介词“on”，所以应说“on the road”，而不是“in the road”。