自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 과거의 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 과거형을 사용하세요. “I haven't had”와 “I have to learn” 대신 “I didn't have”와 “I had to learn”이 적절합니다. 또한 “when I was child”에는 관사 “a”가 필요하고, “I miss the like the time”은 의미가 불분명하므로 “I never got around to learning to ride a bike”처럼 간결하게 표현하세요.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I had to learn inline skating, so I never got around to learning how to ride one.

建議: 질문에 바로 답하기 위해 “Yes, I think so” 또는 “Yes, they are”로 시작하세요. “can buy”는 질문에 맞지 않으므로 삭제하고, “bike cycle”처럼 표현을 반복하지 말고 “bicycle”이나 “bike” 하나만 사용하세요. “widespreaded”는 올바른 형태가 아니므로 “widespread”라고 하며, 이유나 구체적인 예를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 충실해집니다.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to get around, especially in areas with dedicated bike lanes.

× I haven't had a bike when I was child because I have to learn inline skating so I miss the like the time when I can learn bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I had to learn inline skating, so I missed the chance to learn to ride a bike.

The answer describes a completed period in the past, so use the simple past: didn't have, had to, and missed. When referring to an ability or opportunity in that past period, use could rather than can.

× I haven't had a bike when I was child because I have to learn inline skating so I miss the like the time when I can learn bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I had to learn inline skating, so I missed the chance to learn to ride a bike.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child: I was a child. Before a singular countable noun, an article or another determiner is generally required.

× I haven't had a bike when I was child because I have to learn inline skating so I miss the like the time when I can learn bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I had to learn inline skating, so I missed the chance to learn to ride a bike.

Learn bike is not a complete or natural way to express this idea. Use learn to ride a bike: learn is followed by an infinitive when describing a skill someone acquires.

× I think it's right because um almost everyone in my country can buy uh can ride a bike cycle can ride a bicycle so I think it's so popular and widespreaded

✓ I think it's right because almost everyone in my country can ride a bicycle, so I think it's very popular and widespread.

Widespread is the correct adjective; it does not take the ending -ed. Use widespread to describe something that is common across a large area or among many people.