自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand because several words appear to be incorrect or out of place. Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike, then add one clear detail about how you used it. Check that your verbs and vocabulary accurately express your meaning, and avoid repeating “every day.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it with my friends almost every day. We often cycled to nearby snack shops.

建議: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but “commit to school or works” should be “commute to school or work.” Avoid repeating “because”; connect your ideas with “and” or “since.” You could also add a specific detail about when people use bikes.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute to school or work. They also help people save money on transport, especially for short journeys.

× I used to eat too every day with my friends because.

✓ I used to eat too every day with my friends.

Because introduces a dependent clause that needs a main clause to complete the thought. Since no reason follows, remove because. If you meant to describe cycling, say: I used to ride my bike every day with my friends.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because riding a bike is very convenient for us to commit to school or works because we can save money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because riding a bike is very convenient for us to commute to school or work, and we can save money.

In this context, work is an uncountable noun referring to a workplace or employment, so it does not take the plural form works. Also, commute is the appropriate verb for traveling regularly to school or work; commit has a different meaning.