自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Several phrases are difficult to understand: “when I was tried,” “small room bike,” “training walls,” “lie around,” and “wrote it.” Use the likely expressions “when I was three,” “a small bike,” “training wheels,” “ride around,” and “rode it.” Finish your final sentence with a complete thought, and keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it around the school near my house with my friends. I rode it almost every day, so I have fond memories of it.

建議: Give a direct answer and make sure the key noun and reason are clear. “Biceps” does not fit this question; say “bikes” or “bicycles.” The word “dryhood” is unclear, so replace it with a specific reason, such as affordability, convenience, or the popularity of cycling for exercise. Add a brief supporting detail or example.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use them for short trips to work or to nearby shops.

× Well yes, I had a bike when I was tried.

✓ Well, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I was tried' uses a passive verb form that does not fit the intended meaning. In this context, say 'when I was a child' to refer to the time in the past.