自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答并注意使用过去时：小时候的经历应说“had”或“rode”，而不是“have”或“ride”。表达所属关系时说“it belonged to my father”，不要说“it's belongs”。最后一句意思不清楚；如果想表达摔倒擦伤膝盖，可以说“我骑车时摔倒，擦伤了膝盖”。建议用一到两句补充具体回忆，并避免重复和停顿。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, although it belonged to my father. I used to ride it around our neighborhood, and once I fell off and scraped my knee.

建議: 需要直接回答现在自行车在你们国家是否流行，而不只是谈小时候。注意使用正确的时态和表达：“bikes were popular”用于过去；“only a few people could afford them”表示只有少数人买得起。你提到自行车很贵，因此“很多人骑自行车”的结论不够连贯；可以解释这是过去的情况，或改为比较过去和现在。结尾表达不完整，可能想说“rode bikes”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys. When I was a child, however, they were expensive, so only a few people could afford one. Nowadays, more people own bikes because they are easier to buy.

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况，属于过去，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在时 have。建议留意句中的时间标志词，如 when I was a child，并确保动词时态与之保持一致。

× It's not belongs to me. It's belongs, uh, it, it belongs to my father.

✓ It didn't belong to me; it belonged to my father.

英语中不能把 be 动词 is 和另一个带 -s 的谓语动词 belongs 直接连用。描述过去时，应使用“didn't + 动词原形”构成否定句，并使用 belonged 表示过去的所属关系。建议避免重复主语和谓语，并用完整、简洁的句子表达。

× I ride it and the broken my knees.

✓ I rode it and broke my knees.

句子讲述童年时发生的事情，所以 ride 和 break 都应使用过去式：rode 和 broke。原句中的 the broken 不能在这里作谓语；建议使用“主语 + 过去式动词”的结构。

× When I was a child- child, bike was very popular in my time.

✓ When I was a child, bikes were very popular.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes；复数主语需要搭配 were。建议在泛指一类可数名词时使用复数形式，并检查主语和谓语是否一致。

× Because it it was expensive in that time.

✓ Because they were expensive at that time.

前文泛指自行车，应用复数代词 they，而不是单数 it；因此谓语也应使用 were。另外，表示“在那个时候”通常说 at that time。建议确保代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。

× Only few people can bother it.

✓ Only a few people could afford them.

few 前面通常需要加 a，a few 表示“少数、一些”；由于这里谈的是过去的情况，can 应改为 could。根据上下文，expensive 的东西是“买得起”的，因此 afford them 才符合句意。建议区分 a few（有一些）和 few（几乎没有），并让情态动词与过去语境一致。

× So uh many people, many people wrote back.

✓ So many people rode bikes.

这里是在描述过去人们骑自行车的情况，ride 的过去式是 rode。wrote 是 write 的过去式，不能表达“骑自行车”。建议熟记不规则动词的过去式，并根据上下文选择正确的动词。