自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了自行车的颜色和来源，这是有用的细节。但句子在语法和表达上有明显问题，例如应说“the bike was given to me”，并避免重复“our family suffer / was suffering”。回答最后没有说完。建议用两到三句完整表达，并用一个简短原因补充背景。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that was given to me by a close friend of my father. My family was going through a difficult financial period at the time, so I was very grateful for it.

建議: 你回答了自行车很受欢迎，并用北京的情况作了补充，内容切题。不过要注意主谓一致，应说“bikes are”；“the city of bike”表达不自然，可说“the City of Bikes”。此外，回答以“or”结尾，意思没有说完。建议用完整句子说明人们骑车的常见用途，并补充一个具体原因。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in Beijing, which is often called the “City of Bikes.” You can see many people cycling to work or riding to nearby shops. I think they are popular because they are convenient and help people avoid traffic.

× When I was a child I had a small red bike and that bike given to by my father's close friends because at that time our family suffer our family was suffering a severe financial problem and we had some difficulties in our

✓ When I was a child, I had a small red bike, and that bike was given to me by my father's close friends because our family was suffering from a severe financial problem at the time, and we were having some difficulties.

“that bike given to”缺少被动语态所需的助动词。一般过去时的被动语态结构是“was/were + 过去分词”，所以应说“that bike was given”。“给我”需要补充“to me”。

× When I was a child I had a small red bike and that bike given to by my father's close friends because at that time our family suffer our family was suffering a severe financial problem and we had some difficulties in our

✓ When I was a child, I had a small red bike, and that bike was given to me by my father's close friends because our family was suffering from a severe financial problem at the time, and we were having some difficulties.

这段话描述的是童年时期发生的事情，因此动词应使用过去时。原句中的“our family suffer”是现在时，应改为“our family suffered”或“our family was suffering”。这里用“was suffering”来表达当时持续的困难。

× Yeah, bikes is very popular in our country, especially my city.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country, especially in my city.

主语“bikes”是复数，be动词也应使用复数形式“are”，不能用“is”。此外，“especially”后说明地点时应加介词“in”，所以说“especially in my city”。

× Beijing, uh, the capital city and it's another nickname of the city of bike.

✓ Beijing, the capital city, is also known as the City of Bikes.

原句中“Beijing, the capital city”只是名词短语，后面的“and it's another nickname...”无法与前面的结构正确衔接，导致句子结构不完整。可以将“Beijing”作为主语，用“is also known as”引出它的称号。