自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거형을 사용해야 합니다. “I ride a bike since six years old”는 문법적으로 부자연스러우므로 “I learned to ride a bike when I was six” 또는 “I’ve been riding a bike since I was six”라고 표현하세요. 마지막 문장은 의미가 불분명하므로 자전거를 어디에서, 어떤 목적으로 탔는지 명확히 설명하고, 이유나 구체적인 경험을 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was six, and I often rode it to school. It was a convenient way to get around, and I really enjoyed it.

建議: 중국과 한국을 비교한 점은 구체적인 근거가 될 수 있지만, 첫 문장의 “No, I don't think that”은 무엇을 부정하는지 다소 어색합니다. “Bikes aren’t as popular in Korea as they are in China”처럼 비교 대상을 명확히 말하세요. “riding bike”는 “riding bikes”로 고치고, 답변이 중간에 끊기지 않도록 산과 언덕이 자전거 이용을 어떻게 불편하게 하는지 끝까지 설명하세요.

範例: I don’t think bikes are as popular in Korea as they are in China. When I visited China, I saw many people using bikes in their daily lives. Korea has a lot of mountains and hills, so cycling can be difficult in some areas.

× I ride a bike since six years old.

✓ I've ridden a bike since I was six years old.

The present simple ride is not appropriate with since when describing an action that began in the past and continues to the present. Use the present perfect, have ridden. Also include I was before six years old to form a complete clause.

× There were more people riding bike in normal life.

✓ There were more people riding bikes in normal life.

Bike is a countable noun used here to refer to bikes in general, so it should be plural: bikes.