自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提供了具体经历，但时态和表达有明显问题：“when I was a child”应搭配过去时，例如“had”；“every days”应改为“every day”。避免重复和自我修正，先直接回答，再补充一个清晰的细节。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school every day, and it was a convenient way to get around.

建議: 回答开头表达了肯定，但后面的内容反复提到童年，没有直接说明自行车现在是否受欢迎，而且句子没有说完。请围绕问题说明普及程度，并补充一个具体原因或例子；注意使用完整句子，例如“many families own at least one bike”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many families own at least one, and people often use them for short trips because they are affordable and convenient.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and I was I go to s I went to school by bike every days.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, and I went to school by bike every day.

这里描述的是童年发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。表示“有”应将 have 改为 had。建议讲述过去经历时，检查句中的动词是否都使用过去式。

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and I was I go to s I went to school by bike every days.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, and I went to school by bike every day.

every day 表示“每天”，其中 day 应用单数形式；every days 不正确。注意 every 后通常接单数可数名词。