自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then explain your experience with one clear reason. Use natural phrasing such as “when I was little” instead of “in that time period,” and avoid repeating words or using unclear phrases like “foot bicycle.”

範例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. However, I was afraid to ride it at first because I was quite young, so my parents helped me learn.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with one specific example or reason. Avoid repeating “most of the time,” use “cycling” or “travelling by bike” instead of “travelings,” and finish your sentence so your meaning is complete.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient for short trips.

× I can remember when I was a child I had a bike, mmm, which is a foot bicycle, uh, but I'm very afraid to ride that bice bike in that time period because I'm very little.

✓ I can remember that when I was a child, I had a bike, which was a foot bicycle, but I was very afraid to ride it at that time because I was very little.

The speaker is describing a past childhood experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense: is becomes was, and I'm becomes I was. Use it rather than repeating that bice bike; this also removes the apparent stutter.

× I can remember when I was a child I had a bike, mmm, which is a foot bicycle, uh, but I'm very afraid to ride that bice bike in that time period because I'm very little.

✓ I can remember that when I was a child, I had a bike, which was a foot bicycle, but I was very afraid to ride it at that time because I was very little.

Use at that time, not in that time period, to refer naturally to a specific point or period in the past. Remember this common time expression: at that time.

× Yes, actually, I think most of the time bikes are very common in my country, but I'm saying that most of the time people used bikes for their travelings and many purposes like that means bring their

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are very common in my country. Most of the time, people use bikes for travel and many other purposes.

The answer describes a general situation in the country, so use the present-tense verb use rather than the past-tense used. Use the present tense for habits and general facts.

× Yes, actually, I think most of the time bikes are very common in my country, but I'm saying that most of the time people used bikes for their travelings and many purposes like that means bring their

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are very common in my country. Most of the time, people use bikes for travel and many other purposes.

Travel is generally an uncountable noun when it refers to the activity of going from place to place, so travelings is not appropriate here. Use travel, or say journeys if you mean individual trips.

× Yes, actually, I think most of the time bikes are very common in my country, but I'm saying that most of the time people used bikes for their travelings and many purposes like that means bring their

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are very common in my country. Most of the time, people use bikes for travel and many other purposes.

The ending like that means bring their is incomplete and does not form a clear grammatical clause. Complete the thought with a subject, a properly formed verb, and an object, or omit the fragment if the recording was cut off. For clarity, state the main idea in a complete sentence.