自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 这句话重复了考官的问题，没有回答自己小时候是否有自行车；而且把“bike”说成了“buck”，并漏掉了“a child”前的冠词“a”。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车是谁买的或你骑车做什么。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: 你表达了肯定态度，也提到了人们骑车通勤的用途，但句子被不自然的停顿拆开了。“people usually go to work to use back”语法和搭配不正确；可以说“people often use bikes to get to work”或“people often commute by bike”。建议直接回答问题，并用一个具体原因或场景补充说明。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work because they’re affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× Did you have a buck when you were child?

✓ Did you have a buck when you were a child?

在单数可数名词 child 前需要使用冠词。此处应加不定冠词 a，改为 a child。

× Yes, in my country people usually. Go to work to use back.

✓ Yes, in my country, people usually go to work by bike.

原句在 usually 后错误地用句号把句子分开，导致 Go to work 成为缺少主语的句子片段。应将 go 放回主句中，并用完整的介词短语 by bike 表达骑车上班。