自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的来源、颜色和父亲教你骑车的经历，内容有个人细节。注意统一使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”，“is”改为“was”，并用“gave me”“was holding the back of the bike”等自然表达。避免用多个“and”连接所有信息，可用“which”和“when”组织句子。

範例: Yes, I did. My sister gave me a pink bike, and my dad taught me how to ride it when I was little. He held the back of the bike at first, which made me feel much more confident.

建議: 你直接表达了观点，也用童年社区的经历来支持答案，这是好的。表达观点时“in my opinion”和“I guess”意思重复，保留一个即可。注意区分过去和现在：描述童年时用过去时；“catch a time”不自然，可改为“find some time”或“decide to go for a ride”。还可以补充一条当前的具体观察，让回答更贴合“现在是否流行”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. When I was a child, almost every kid in my neighborhood had one, and we often rode around together after school. I still see many people cycling for exercise or short trips.

× Absolutely yes, when I was a kid I have a bike from my sister and the bike is very beautiful and have pink color and my dad is catch my back and teach me how to bike it.

✓ Absolutely, yes. When I was a kid, I got a bike from my sister. The bike was very beautiful and pink, and my dad held my back and taught me how to ride it.

这句话描述的是小时候发生的事情，因此相关动词应使用过去时。原句中的“have”“is”“teach”应分别改为“got”“was”“taught”；“is catch”也不能用于描述过去发生的动作，这里改为过去式“held”。描述自行车的颜色时，用“was pink”即可。建议先确定叙述的时间，再检查句中的动词是否都与过去时间一致。

× In my opinion, I guess yes, because when I was a kid in our community every kid has a bike and we just catch a time and said let's go for a ride and we just ride together.

✓ In my opinion, I guess yes, because when I was a kid, every kid in our community had a bike, and we just found time and said, “Let’s go for a ride,” and then we rode together.

这里回忆的是小时候的情况，所以动词应使用过去时。“has”应改为“had”，“catch”应改为“found”，“ride”应改为“rode”。“said”已经是过去时，可以保留。建议讲述过去的经历时，统一检查主要动词的时态；此外，“find time”表示“找时间”，比“catch a time”更自然。