自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，再补充一两个相关细节。注意避免重复表达（“bike bicycle”），并使用正确的过去时，例如“couldn’t ride”；回答中途不要停顿或改口，尽量组织成完整、自然的句子。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a cute pink bike when I was little. I couldn’t ride it at first, so my dad helped me practise in the park.

建議: 先明确回答现在自行车是否流行，再用过去与现在的对比说明变化。注意时态和语法：可说“they weren’t very popular a few years ago”和“in recent years”；“contacted the green environment”表达不自然，可以改为“people have become more environmentally conscious”。

範例: Yes, bikes have become much more popular in my country. A few years ago, not many people used them, but in recent years, more people have started cycling because they want to protect the environment. Bike-sharing schemes have also made cycling more convenient.

× and I at first I can't.

✓ but at first I couldn't.

这里描述的是童年时的经历，整段叙述使用过去时，因此不能用表示现在或一般能力的“can't”，应改为过去式“couldn't”。此外，原句重复使用“I”，改写时应删去重复部分。

× I don't know how to ride a bike bicycle but.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bicycle.

句子说的是小时候不会骑自行车，应该使用过去时“didn't know”，而不是现在时“don't know”。“bike bicycle”重复表达同一个意思；“but”放在句末也使句子不完整，因此删去重复词和多余的“but”。

× Many a few years ago

✓ A few years ago

“many”和“a few”不能这样叠加使用。表示“几年前”时，直接说“A few years ago”即可。

× it didn't very popular

✓ it wasn't very popular

“popular”是形容词，描述主语“it”的状态时需要系动词“be”。“didn't”后通常要接动词原形，不能直接接形容词，所以应改为过去式“wasn't”。

× recent years

✓ in recent years

表示“近年来”时，固定搭配是“in recent years”，需要在“recent years”前加介词“in”。

× this concept they tried to ride bicycles

✓ because of this idea, people tried to ride bicycles

原句把“this concept”和“they tried”直接放在一起，缺少清晰的语法连接，结构不完整。可以用“because of this idea”引出原因，并把“people”作为“tried”的主语。

× so it became more and more popular now

✓ so it is becoming more and more popular now

“now”表示目前正在发生或持续的趋势，因此用现在进行时“is becoming”更合适。原句使用过去式“became”，与“now”表达的现在时间不一致。