自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify your answer because “No” conflicts with “I did have a bicycle.” Use the past tense consistently, and give one or two specific details about how you used the bicycle. Avoid repeating “bike” and “bicycle” unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it to ride to college, and sometimes I went for a ride around my neighborhood.

建議: Answer directly, then support your opinion with clear, specific reasons or examples. Use natural phrases such as “commute to college” and “ride in the park,” rather than “go for a park.” Reduce fillers, and finish your final thought instead of ending with “it is also.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to college or work because they are affordable and convenient. Others ride them in parks for exercise and recreation.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I have.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle.

The question asks about the past, so the present-tense have does not fit. Use did have to keep the response in the past tense. The correction also completes the thought.

× I use that bicycle for going to college and sometimes for a ride also.

✓ I used that bicycle to go to college and sometimes to go for a ride as well.

The response describes past experience, so use used rather than use. To go is also a clear and natural way to express the purpose of using the bicycle.

× People, uh, use them for a ride and for, uh, commute to college as I earlier said and uh go for a park and it is also

✓ People use them for rides and for commuting to college, as I said earlier, and to go to the park.

After the preposition for, use a gerund when describing an activity: commuting, not commute. Use rides for a general plural meaning. The parallel phrasing for rides, for commuting, and to go makes the list clearer.

× People, uh, use them for a ride and for, uh, commute to college as I earlier said and uh go for a park and it is also

✓ People use them for rides and for commuting to college, as I said earlier, and to go to the park.

The usual preposition with go when naming a destination is to, so say go to the park, not go for a park.

× People, uh, use them for a ride and for, uh, commute to college as I earlier said and uh go for a park and it is also

✓ People use them for rides, to commute to college, and to go to the park.

The ending it is also is an unfinished clause and does not complete the sentence. Remove it unless you can add the intended idea, and keep the activities in a parallel list.