自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then explain why you did not learn to ride. Use the past-tense form “had” rather than “have,” and avoid unclear phrases such as “I have a Pike, but not me.” If you mean that you had a tricycle or another kind of bike, name it clearly. Add one specific detail, such as how you felt when other children rode their bikes.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, although I really wanted one. Most of my friends could ride, but no one at home had the time to teach me, so I never learned.

建議: Give a clear present-day answer to the question, then support it with a reason or example. Avoid repeating the same idea, and check word choice and verb tense: “every cat” is unclear here, and “has” does not agree with the past-time reference. You could mention where people commonly ride bikes or why they use them.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. Many families buy bikes for their kids, and people also use them to get around because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× Everyone else have it.

✓ Everyone else had one.

The sentence refers to the student's childhood, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. Use one to refer back to a bike and avoid repeating the noun.

× Yes, every kid at that time when I was young, every cat has a bike except me.

✓ Yes, when I was young, every kid had a bike except me.

The phrase when I was young places the situation in the past, so use had rather than has. The original also repeats the idea and is not a complete, clear sentence; the correction expresses it as one complete sentence.