自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had a bike when I did a child. My parents vowed if it for my birthday. My bike was pink and I used to ride it every day. I loved reading it around the neighborhood.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
In my opinion, bicycles are very popular in cities because of bike sharing trimmings that people use for short short journals to avoid traffic conversation. I also ride a bike every day to commute to work which saves me time and money.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 42.0建議: Исправьте грамматические и лексические ошибки: скажите “when I was a child”, “my parents bought it for me” и “riding it around the neighborhood”. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретную деталь или причину. Используйте естественные выражения и проверьте форму глаголов.
範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a pink bike for my birthday when I was a child, and I rode it around my neighborhood almost every day. I loved it because it gave me a sense of freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 55.0建議: Ответьте прямо в начале, например: “Yes, I think they are.” Замените неестественные выражения на “bike-sharing schemes”, “short journeys” и “traffic congestion”; избегайте повтора “short”. Разделите длинную мысль на ясные предложения и добавьте конкретное пояснение о популярности велосипедов.
範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in cities, especially because of bike-sharing schemes. People often use them for short journeys to avoid traffic congestion. I cycle to work every day, which saves me both time and money.
文法
× Yes, I had a bike when I did a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
Use the past-tense form was to describe your state as a child. Did is used to form questions or negatives with other verbs, and it cannot be used before a noun to mean was. Remember the pattern: I was a child.
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