自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer with a complete, natural sentence. Use the correct word “bike” and past-tense grammar: say “when I was a child,” not “when I'm child.” You could add one specific detail, such as where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a relevant reason or example. The current response is difficult to follow and does not clearly explain why bikes are popular. Avoid repeated phrases and fillers, use correct subject–verb agreement (“bikes are”), and mention a specific use, such as commuting or exercise.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and help them avoid traffic.

× Yes, I had bite when I'm child.

✓ Yes, I had bite when I was a child.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Replace I'm with I was. Use a before the singular countable noun child; the article error is listed separately.

× Yes, I had bite when I'm child.

✓ Yes, I had bite when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a child, not just child. The past-tense error is listed separately.

× I think so because the bikes, uh, is one of the um main con program that uh m- mostly of the athletes they have used this kind of program, uh, to to use uh to showcase their uh pro their um to showcase their hobby and also to showcase their uh interest

✓ I think so because bikes are one of the main programs that most athletes use to showcase their hobbies and interests.

The plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, not is. The revised sentence also removes disfluencies and makes the intended meaning clearer.

× I think so because the bikes, uh, is one of the um main con program that uh m- mostly of the athletes they have used this kind of program, uh, to to use uh to showcase their uh pro their um to showcase their hobby and also to showcase their uh interest

✓ I think so because bikes are one of the main programs that most athletes use to showcase their hobbies and interests.

After one of the, the following noun should be plural, so use programs rather than program. Hobbies and interests are also plural here because the sentence refers generally to what athletes showcase.

× I think so because the bikes, uh, is one of the um main con program that uh m- mostly of the athletes they have used this kind of program, uh, to to use uh to showcase their uh pro their um to showcase their hobby and also to showcase their uh interest

✓ I think so because bikes are one of the main programs that most athletes use to showcase their hobbies and interests.

Use most of the athletes or most athletes to refer to a majority of the group. Mostly is an adverb and does not fit this quantifier structure.