自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes”, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: dùng “had” thay cho “have”. Hãy dùng đúng từ “bike” (không phải “bye”) và nói “when I was a child” thay vì “when I had a child”. Có thể bổ sung một chi tiết ngắn, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Câu trả lời có nêu ý kiến và đưa ra lý do, nhưng nhiều cụm từ chưa rõ nghĩa và sai ngữ pháp. Hãy nói thẳng “Bikes aren’t very popular in my country”; dùng “my country” ở dạng số ít, bỏ các từ thừa như “your” và “my”, và sửa “go to buy” thành cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn như “prefer to use”. Nên giải thích cụ thể rằng người dân thường chọn xe máy hoặc ô tô để đi lại.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to use motorbikes or cars because they are more convenient for getting around.

× Yes, I have a bye when I had a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the simple past had instead of the present perfect have. Use was a child to express the past state of being a child.

× I think by not popular in your my countries.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The clause bikes not popular is missing a verb. Add are to form the complete verb phrase are not popular.

× I think by not popular in your my countries.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

Your and my are conflicting possessive words here. Use only my to show that the speaker is referring to their own country.

× I think by not popular in your my countries.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The speaker refers to one country, so use the singular noun country rather than the plural countries.

× In my country, people usually go to buy motorbike or car.

✓ In my country, people usually go to buy a motorbike or a car.

Motorbike and car are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article. Use a before each noun.