自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Geçmişteki bir alışkanlık veya sahiplikten söz ettiğiniz için “I do have” yerine “I had” kullanın. “When I was a child” ifadesinde “a” artikeli gerekir. İkinci cümleniz soruyu iyi destekliyor; yanıtı bu iki cümleyle kısa ve net tutabilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My granddad bought it for my 12th birthday.

建議: Doğrudan fikrinizi belirterek başlayın: “I think bikes are fairly popular.” Özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin (“people love”) ve “love riding” yapısını kullanın. “Free time” ve “hobby” ifadelerini tekrarlamak yerine bisikletlerin ulaşım mı yoksa eğlence amacıyla mı kullanıldığını açıklayın; örneğin sabahları egzersiz için kullanıldıklarını belirtin.

範例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, but people mostly use them for exercise rather than commuting. For example, you can often see people cycling in the morning.

× I do have a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so use the simple past form had rather than the present form do have. Match the tense of the verb to the past time reference when describing completed experiences.

× I do have a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before child. Remember that singular countable nouns generally need a determiner, such as a, an, or the.

× I think a lot of people uh loves ride bikes even in the morning times, but they're not using that much as a transportation. stuff, but for a free time hobby or free time uh activity or hobby.

✓ I think a lot of people love riding bikes, even in the morning, but they do not use them much for transportation; they use them for a hobby or another leisure activity.

People is plural, so it takes the verb love, not loves. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject; plural subjects do not take the third-person singular -s ending.

× I think a lot of people uh loves ride bikes even in the morning times, but they're not using that much as a transportation. stuff, but for a free time hobby or free time uh activity or hobby.

✓ I think a lot of people love riding bikes, even in the morning, but they do not use them much for transportation; they use them for a hobby or another leisure activity.

After love, a gerund is natural here: riding. The infinitive to ride would also be grammatical. Use love riding or love to ride, not love ride.

× I think a lot of people uh loves ride bikes even in the morning times, but they're not using that much as a transportation. stuff, but for a free time hobby or free time uh activity or hobby.

✓ I think a lot of people love riding bikes, even in the morning, but they do not use them much for transportation; they use them for a hobby or another leisure activity.

Transportation is generally an uncountable noun when referring to the general means of moving people or goods, so it does not take a here. Say for transportation, not as a transportation.

× I think a lot of people uh loves ride bikes even in the morning times, but they're not using that much as a transportation. stuff, but for a free time hobby or free time uh activity or hobby.

✓ I think a lot of people love riding bikes, even in the morning, but they do not use them much for transportation; they use them for a hobby or another leisure activity.

The final but for a free time hobby or activity phrase does not have a complete clause, so the thought is left unfinished. Add a subject and verb, such as they use them, to make the contrast a complete sentence.