自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ дан прямо и дополнен конкретными деталями, а причина связана с помощью «because». Исправьте грамматику: перед «child» нужен артикль «a» — «when I was a child». Для большей естественности можно сказать «I rode it to the park» вместо «I used it to ride to the park».

範例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the park with my friends because it was fun and easy to control.

建議: Ответ слишком краткий и содержит ошибки. Используйте множественное число «bikes» и избегайте разговорного «ain’t»; правильно: «bikes are» или «bikes aren’t». Кроме того, ответ «Yes» противоречит утверждению, что велосипеды непопулярны. Уточните позицию и добавьте конкретную причину или пример.

範例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people prefer to drive because the roads can be busy and there aren’t enough safe cycling lanes.

× I had a small red bike when I was child.

✓ I had a small red bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child when referring to someone at that stage of life.

× Yes, bike ain't popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes aren't popular in my country.

The answer refers to bikes as a general category, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike.

× Yes, bike ain't popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes aren't popular in my country.

The plural subject bikes takes the plural verb are not, contracted as aren't. Ain't is nonstandard in formal English; use isn't with a singular subject or aren't with a plural subject.