自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提供了受伤后不再骑车的具体原因。不过，“Yeah, yes”重复；“had a background”用词错误，应说“had a bike”；“as a child”和“as a kid”意思重复；“never rode that bike later”不够自然，可以说“never rode it again”。建议用直接回答加一个具体原因，表达更简洁流畅。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, but I fell off it and hurt myself once, so I never rode it again.

建議: 你表达了“自行车挺受欢迎”的观点，也提到了路上有很多骑车的人，但回答中有明显的重复和停顿，影响流畅度。“many riders are riding it”指代不清，可改为“many people ride them”；“transformation”应为“form of transportation”。“骑车去骑行”表达重复，可以补充更具体的用途，例如通勤或休闲，并用“because”连接理由。

範例: Yes, I’d say bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people riding them to work or using them for leisure, especially on weekends. They’re a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around.

× There are a lot of bikes on the road and many riders are riding it to cycle or go for a picnic.

✓ There are a lot of bikes on the road, and many riders are riding them to cycle or go for a picnic.

“It”是单数代词，但它指代复数名词“bikes”，因此应改为复数代词“them”。修改后，代词与其指代的名词在单复数上保持一致。