自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明原因。注意“my parents sold”后面缺少宾语，表达不完整；“bikie”应改为“bike”，“girls should be gentle”也不太自然。可以清楚说明父母的看法，以及他们对安全的顾虑。避免说到一半中断，补充一个具体细节即可。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought cycling was more suitable for boys, and they were also worried that I might get hurt. So, I usually walked or played near home instead.

建議: 回答与问题的方向不一致：题目问自行车是否流行，你可以先明确表示自行车流行或不太流行，再用汽车普及的情况作比较。“much more popularity”应改为“more popular”；“science and technology”后需要接完整、合理的原因。删去重复和未完成的内容，并补充一个具体例子。

範例: Bikes are still fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live close to work. However, many people prefer driving because cars are more convenient for longer journeys. In large cities, cycling is also a practical way to avoid traffic.

× because my parents sold

✓ because my parents sold my bike

动词“sold”后面缺少宾语，句子结构不完整。这里可以补上“my bike”，明确父母卖掉了什么。

× and the thing I prefer to

✓ and something I preferred to do

“prefer to”后面需要接动词原形；原句以“to”结束，表达没有完成。可以补上“do”构成完整表达。

× driving a car is much more popularity

✓ driving a car is much more popular

“is”后面需要用形容词描述开车这种行为是否受欢迎，而“popularity”是名词。应改用形容词“popular”。