自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answer directly and include a personal memory, but frequent fillers make the response less fluent. Correct the grammar in “I spending” and clarify what you did with your friend. Use the past tense consistently, and avoid repeating “childhood.”

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I loved it because I thought it was beautiful, and it brings back fond memories. My best friend and I used to ride our bikes around the neighborhood after school.

建議: Give a clear answer, then explain where people use bikes and why. The response is difficult to follow because “from everywhere” and “which is a” are unclear, and the verb forms in “to having” and “parents wants” are incorrect. Use specific examples and complete your final thought.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see children riding them in parks for fun, while many adults use them for exercise or short trips. Some older people also enjoy cycling because it is a gentle way to stay active.

× Umm, it's real and nostalgic for me, uh, because, umm, in my childhood, uh, with my best friend, I spending my childhood time with this.

✓ It is real and nostalgic for me because I spent time with my best friend and this bike during my childhood.

The speaker is describing an experience from childhood, so the past-tense verb spent is needed. I spending is not a complete verb phrase in this sentence. Use the simple past for completed events in the past.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country from everywhere in parks or gym and sometimes for children to having some fun and exercise and also some old parents wants to having some light exercise and workout which is a.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular everywhere in my country, including in parks and gyms. Children sometimes use them to have fun and exercise, and some older parents also want to do light exercise and work out.

From is not the appropriate preposition here. To express that bikes are popular in all parts of the country, say popular everywhere in my country or popular throughout my country.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country from everywhere in parks or gym and sometimes for children to having some fun and exercise and also some old parents wants to having some light exercise and workout which is a.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular everywhere in my country, including in parks and gyms. Children sometimes use them to have fun and exercise, and some older parents also want to do light exercise and work out.

The sentence refers to parks in general, so the countable noun gym should also be plural: gyms. Use a plural noun when referring to more than one gym or to gyms generally.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country from everywhere in parks or gym and sometimes for children to having some fun and exercise and also some old parents wants to having some light exercise and workout which is a.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular everywhere in my country, including in parks and gyms. Children sometimes use them to have fun and exercise, and some older parents also want to do light exercise and work out.

After to used to form an infinitive, use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, say to have and want to do, not to having.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country from everywhere in parks or gym and sometimes for children to having some fun and exercise and also some old parents wants to having some light exercise and workout which is a.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular everywhere in my country, including in parks and gyms. Children sometimes use them to have fun and exercise, and some older parents also want to do light exercise and work out.

The subject parents is plural, so it must take the plural verb want, not wants. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country from everywhere in parks or gym and sometimes for children to having some fun and exercise and also some old parents wants to having some light exercise and workout which is a.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular everywhere in my country, including in parks and gyms. Children sometimes use them to have fun and exercise, and some older parents also want to do light exercise and work out.

The ending which is a is incomplete because a requires a noun or another complement to complete the clause. Finish the thought with the missing information or remove the unfinished clause.