自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問は過去のことなので、最初に “Yes, I did.” と過去形で直接答えましょう。“it was so hard to the first time” は不自然なので、“it was difficult to ride it at first” のように表現できます。父親がどう助けてくれたかを具体的に述べ、同じ内容の繰り返しは避けましょう。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and it was difficult to ride at first. My father helped me balance, and after a few days, I was able to ride it by myself.

建議: “Do you think…?” には “Yes, I think they are.” とまず答えましょう。一般的な自転車について述べる場合は “bikes” と複数形にし、“a license is not required” のように表現すると自然です。“so” の繰り返しや “you everybody” を避け、人気の理由を一つか二つに絞って、交通手段としての便利さなど具体的に説明しましょう。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips. Also, you don’t need a license to ride one, so people of different ages can use them.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had to match the past-time context.

× When I was a child it was so hard to the first time

✓ When I was a child, it was so hard at first

To is not the correct preposition in this expression. Use at first to mean during the initial period of learning or doing something.

× because bike is very useful for the people

✓ because bikes are very useful for people

Bike is a countable noun used here to refer to bikes in general, so use the plural form bikes. The verb must also agree with the plural subject, so use are.

× bike is not required license

✓ you don't need a license to ride a bike

The original clause does not have a grammatical structure: a bike cannot be described as not required license. Use the structure you don't need a license to express that riding a bike does not require a license.

× because bike is very useful for the people so and bike is not required license

✓ because bikes are very useful for people and you don't need a license to ride one

Do not combine so and and in this way. Use and to connect the two reasons, or use so to introduce a result. Here, and clearly joins the two reasons.

× So we practice to ride a bike

✓ So we practice riding a bike

The verb practice is followed by a gerund, the -ing form of a verb, rather than an infinitive with to. Use practice riding.

× you everybody can ride a bike

✓ everybody can ride a bike

You and everybody are competing subjects in this sentence. Use one subject; everybody is appropriate when referring generally to people.