自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 注意时态一致：问题问的是童年经历，应使用过去时，如“Yes, I did”。“right”和“write”应分别改为“ride”；描述速度时可以说“go very fast”。建议先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，例如父母如何教你骑车或你在哪里骑。

範例: Yes, I did. My bike was quite small, so it couldn’t go very fast. My parents taught me how to ride it, and I used to practise in the park near our home.

建議: 先直接回答问题，再解释自行车受欢迎的原因。“suggested us to have”不自然，可改为“encourages people to live a greener lifestyle”；“carbon population”应为“carbon emissions”。可以补充一个具体例子，例如人们骑车通勤或使用共享单车。

範例: Yes, they’re quite popular in my country. The government encourages people to live a greener lifestyle, and cycling helps reduce carbon emissions. For example, many people ride bikes or use shared bikes for short trips.

× Yes, I do, but while I was a child, it couldn't be right so fast, because it was so small.

✓ Yes, I did, but while I was a child, it couldn't be right so fast, because it was so small.

问题类型：过去时错误。问题句回应的是“Did you have...?”，询问过去的情况，因此回答中的助动词也应使用过去式“did”，而不是现在式“do”。

× Oh yes, because our country suggested us to have a green life.

✓ Oh yes, because our country suggested that we have a green life.

问题类型：句子结构错误。“suggest”后面通常接“that + 主语 + 动词”结构，不能用“suggested us to do”这种结构。可以说“suggested that we have...”或“suggested having...”。