自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and add a specific detail, as you did. For more natural phrasing, say “my main way of getting to school” rather than “my major way to go to school,” and use “a 10-minute ride” or “about 10 minutes by bike.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in secondary school, and it was my main way of getting to school. The ride took about ten minutes, so it was really convenient.

建議: Your example about shared bikes is relevant, but the final sentence is difficult to understand. Say “a complement to public transport,” not “a complementary,” and use “a 10-minute walk” instead of “10 minutes works.” Explain that bikes help people travel to or from a station; avoid “your Disney” unless you mean a specific destination.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in China, especially shared bikes in cities. They complement public transport because people can use them to travel between a subway station and their destination. For instance, a shared bike is handy if your home or workplace is a ten-minute walk from the station.

× It was about 10 minutes ride.

✓ It was about a 10-minute ride.

Ride is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. When a time expression comes before a noun as a modifier, use the singular form and hyphenate it: 10-minute ride.

× So shared bikes can be a complementary as the public transport.

✓ So shared bikes can be a complement to public transportation.

Complementary is an adjective, but the phrase a requires a noun. Use complement. The usual construction is a complement to something.

× So shared bikes can be a complementary as the public transport.

✓ So shared bikes can be a complement to public transportation.

Use to after the noun complement to show what something complements. Do not use as in this construction.

× So shared bikes can be a complementary as the public transport.

✓ So shared bikes can be a complement to public transportation.

When referring to public transportation in general, the definite article the is usually unnecessary. Use public transportation.

× For example, you have 10 minutes works away from the subway station to your Disney.

✓ For example, if your destination is a 10-minute walk from the subway station, you can ride a shared bike there.

The original sentence does not form a clear, grammatical structure: you have 10 minutes works away does not correctly express distance, and the relationship between the subway station and the destination is unclear. Use a 10-minute walk from the station to describe the distance, and make the destination the subject of the if-clause.