自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，但时态和表达有明显问题。“When I was a child”指过去，应使用一般过去时；避免重复或中途改口的“I do not have I don't have”。可以用“ No, I didn’t”直接回答，再补充一个具体原因或相关细节。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy area, so my parents thought it was safer for me to walk.

建議: 观点清楚，也给出了原因，但有几处表达不自然。泛指自行车时用复数“bikes”；“usual driving cars”可以改为“driving cars”或“using cars”；“a lot of people who are using”可简化为“many people use”。建议用连接词组织观点和原因，并补充一个具体背景，例如通勤距离或公共交通情况。

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer driving because it’s more convenient for commuting, especially when they need to travel long distances.

× When I was a child, I do not have I don't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，时间是过去，因此否定形式应使用一般过去时“didn't have”。原句中的“do not have”和“I don't have”是现在时，而且重复表达了同一意思。

× In my opinion, bike is not popular in our country because actually there's a lot of people who are using usual driving cars instead of riding on a bike

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not popular in our country because actually there's a lot of people who are using usual driving cars instead of riding on a bike.

这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。复数主语对应的谓语也应使用“are”。

× In my opinion, bike is not popular in our country because actually there's a lot of people who are using usual driving cars instead of riding on a bike

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not popular in our country because actually there are a lot of people who are using usual driving cars instead of riding on a bike.

“a lot of people”是复数，因此“There be”句型中的be动词应使用“are”，不能使用“is”。应说“there are a lot of people”。