自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答意思不够清楚，且时态和句子结构有较多错误。先直接说明小时候是否有自行车，再补充一个具体细节；谈过去时使用过去式，例如“had”，并避免重复或未完成的表达。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends, but I haven't ridden a bike for years.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了周末和早晨的例子，但有一些语法和搭配错误。开头直接回答观点；说“周末”可用“at weekends”，说“骑自行车”用“ride bikes”，并将“there are many people go”改为“many people go”或“there are many people who go”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. At weekends, I often see people riding bikes around the lake, and many commuters cycle to work in the morning.

× Yes, I have a bike

✓ Yes, I had a bike

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此应使用一般过去时。这里的 have 应改为过去式 had。

× Haven't been a long time to ride a bike.

✓ I haven't ridden a bike for a long time.

表达“很久没有骑自行车”时，可用现在完成时 haven't + 过去分词，因此 ride 应改为过去分词 ridden。句子还需要主语 I，并用 for a long time 表示持续的时间。

× in at the weekend

✓ at the weekend

at the weekend 已经是完整的时间表达，不需要再加 in。

× a lot of people riding bike around the lake

✓ a lot of people riding bikes around the lake

这里泛指人们骑自行车，通常使用可数名词 bike 的复数形式 bikes。

× there are many people go to work

✓ there are many people who go to work

there are many people 后面不能直接接谓语 go。可以加关系代词 who，组成 who go to work 来修饰 people。

× on by bike

✓ by bike

by bike 表示“骑自行车”，这里不需要再加 on。