自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并统一使用过去时，例如用“had”而不是“have”。“back”应为“bike”；表达“父亲买给我”可说“my father bought it for me”，不要重复使用“what”和“it”。“everywhere”前不加“to”。最后一句没有说完，应补充一个具体细节，例如你常骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑。

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike that my father bought for me. I loved it because I could ride it around my neighborhood. I often rode it to the park with my friends.

建議: 回答时明确说明“自行车”很受欢迎，可用复数“bikes”或“they”，避免用“it”。注意“write”应为“ride”，“到处骑”直接说“ride them around”，而不是“ride to everywhere”；“在周末”可说“at the weekend”或“on weekends”。用现在时描述目前的普遍情况，并补充具体原因或场景；“每个家庭都买”过于绝对，可改为“many families”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many families buy them for their children because they are a convenient way to get around. At weekends, my friends and I often ride our bikes together in the park.

× Yes, I have a pink back what my father bought it to me. I like it very much because I can ride a bike to everywhere and I also.

✓ Yes, I had a pink bike that my father bought for me. I liked it very much because I could ride a bike everywhere.

问题：回答的是童年经历，应使用过去时。把 have 改为 had，把 like 改为 liked，把 can 改为 could。句中未完成的“and I also”没有表达完整意思，因此在这里删去。

× a pink back what my father bought it to me

✓ a pink bike that my father bought for me

关系从句中应使用 that 指代前面的 bike，不能用 what；同时，that 已经代替 bike 作从句中的宾语，不需要再加 it。back 看起来是 bike 的拼写错误，但不属于指定的语法问题类型，因此此处不作为语法错误说明。

× my father bought it to me; I can ride a bike to everywhere

✓ my father bought it for me; I can ride a bike everywhere

表示“为某人买某物”时用 buy something for someone，而不是 buy something to someone。everywhere 本身表示“到处”，前面不需要加 to。

× and I also.

✓ 删除“and I also”，或补充完整意思，例如：“and I also rode it to school.”

and 后面通常需要接一个完整的并列成分。这里只有主语 I 和副词 also，没有谓语动词或完整意思，因此是句子结构不完整。若继续表达，应补上完整内容；若没有补充内容，则应删除。

× I think it's popular in my country because my friends also have it and we also write it to everywhere together in weekend.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my friends also have them and we also write them everywhere together on weekends.

前文谈论的是复数 bikes，因此后文用代词 them 指代这些自行车更合适；it 是单数代词，与复数指代对象不一致。

× we also write it to everywhere together in weekend

✓ we also write them everywhere together on weekends

everywhere 前不需要加 to。表示“在周末”通常用 on weekends，而不是 in weekend。这里只修改介词相关问题；write 可能是想表达 ride，但词语选择不属于指定的语法问题类型，因此不作修改。