自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了父亲和爷爷教你骑车的细节。不过，“It was about when I was the age of 10”表达不自然，可改为“I was about ten years old”。回答中“uh”和“um”较多，影响流畅度；另外，注意时态一致，用过去时转述父亲当时的想法。可以把内容精简成三句话，并用“So”连接学习骑车的经历。

範例: Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was about ten. He thought it was time for me to learn how to ride, so he and my grandpa taught me. It was a fun experience, and I soon learned to ride on my own.

建議: 回答开头有回应问题，但后面的意思不够清楚，而且句子没有说完，因此缺少完整的观点和结尾。注意用复数“bicycles”或“bikes”，并用“used to”描述父母过去骑车上班；谈到现在时则使用一般现在时。建议先明确说明自行车是否流行，再用父母过去的通勤方式和当下生活节奏作对比，最后补充一个完整的结果或原因。

範例: Yes, bikes are still fairly popular in my country, especially for short trips. When my parents were younger, they often rode bicycles to work. These days, people tend to have a busier lifestyle, so many choose cars or public transport instead.

× It was about when I was the age of 10.

✓ That was when I was about 10 years old.

原句中“It was about when...”的结构不自然，且“the age of 10”与“about”组合显得冗余。可用“That was when...”引出时间，再说“about 10 years old”，表达“那时我大约10岁”。

× Bicycle is kind of popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are kind of popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数形式“bicycles”，谓语也相应使用“are”。

× At that time my parents go to work by riding a bicycle.

✓ At that time, my parents went to work by bicycle.

“At that time”指过去的时间，因此动词“go”应使用过去式“went”。“by bicycle”是更简洁自然的表达。