自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“小时候有自行车”，然后用过去时说明是谁买的，以及你通常用它做什么。注意使用过去时：*had / bought / used*；不要说 *I've been a bike*，可说 *I had a bike*。把活动用 *and* 连接，并补充一个具体细节即可，避免重复和过多停顿。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used it to ride to school and to the park. I also enjoyed cycling with my friends after school.

建議: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再给出具体原因或例子。注意用复数 *bikes*，并可用 *commute* 表达“通勤”。后半句想表达汽车越来越常见时，可说 *cars are becoming more common*，并用 *although* 或 *however* 清楚地连接对比。删去重复的 *nowadays* 和未完成的表达。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people cycle to work or school because it is affordable and convenient. However, cars are becoming more common, so some people now prefer to drive.

× Yes, I've been a bike uh yes, I have a bike because uh it was when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题询问的是童年时的情况，因此应使用一般过去时。表达“有一辆自行车”应说“had a bike”，而不是“I've been a bike”或“I have a bike”。回答时注意让动词时态与过去的时间背景一致。

× My parents buy it for me.

✓ My parents bought it for me.

这里描述父母在过去买自行车的事情，应使用一般过去时。动词“buy”的过去式是“bought”。

× I usually use this bike to uh play with my friends also to go to school or go to park.

✓ I usually use this bike to play with my friends and also to go to school or to go to the park.

“play with my friends”和“go to school or go to the park”是并列的用途，应使用连词“and”连接。列举并列目的时，可使用“to do A and (to) do B”的结构。

× I usually use this bike to uh play with my friends also to go to school or go to park.

✓ I usually use this bike to play with my friends and also to go to school or to go to the park.

“park”是可数名词单数，通常不能单独使用，需要加限定词。此处可以说“the park”。

× MMM, yes, bike is very popular in our country because many people use bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because many people use bikes to go to work or to go to school.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数形式“bikes”。泛指人们使用自行车时也应说“use bikes”，而不是“use bike”。