自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也用生日礼物补充了具体信息。注意时态一致：问题问的是童年经历，应将“I have”改为“I had”或“I received”。另外，可把两句衔接得更自然，并避免重复表达“小时候”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom gave it to me for my birthday, and I rode it around our neighborhood quite often.

建議: 回答直接表达了观点，并用通勤情况作为支持细节。开头“From my perspective”和“I think”意思重复，保留其中一个即可。注意单数可数名词前需要冠词，或改用复数“bicycles”；“their workplaces”也更适合泛指不同通勤者的工作地点。可以补充一个具体原因，让回答更充分。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially during rush hour. Many people cycle to work because it can be quicker than driving in heavy traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”。

× From my perspective, I think bikes are really popular in my country, especially during the rush hour.

✓ From my perspective, I think bikes are really popular in my country, especially during rush hour.

这里泛指“上下班高峰时段”，通常说“during rush hour”，不需要在“rush hour”前加定冠词“the”。

× Many commuters tend to ride bicycle to their workplace.

✓ Many commuters tend to ride bicycles to their workplace.

“Many commuters”指许多通勤者，句子表达的是他们通常骑自行车这一普遍情况，因此“bicycle”应使用复数“bicycles”。