自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Correct the pronoun and use “play,” not “pay.” Give a direct answer, then add one clear detail about who you rode with and where. Avoid repeating “we always” and make sure the final phrase is a complete sentence.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my siblings in the park near our house.

建議: State your opinion clearly and use the plural “bikes.” Explain why they are popular with a complete supporting detail. Use the correct phrase “bike lanes” or “cycling paths,” and avoid stopping mid-sentence.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many towns have bike lanes, so people can cycle to work or school safely.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had, the past tense of have, instead of have.

× When she was a child I used to pay with my siblings and we always have a bike and we always cycling and the park near our house.

✓ When I was a child, I used to pay with my siblings, and we always had a bike and always cycled at the park near our house.

The speaker appears to be describing their own childhood, so she does not match the intended subject. Use I to refer to yourself.

× When she was a child I used to pay with my siblings and we always have a bike and we always cycling and the park near our house.

✓ When I was a child, I used to pay with my siblings, and we always had a bike and always cycled at the park near our house.

The answer describes repeated activities during childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of have and cycled instead of cycling.

× When she was a child I used to pay with my siblings and we always have a bike and we always cycling and the park near our house.

✓ When I was a child, I used to pay with my siblings, and we always had a bike and always cycled at the park near our house.

Use at to indicate the location where the cycling took place: at the park. The original phrase does not include a preposition linking cycling to the park.

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country because we have. Road for recycle for cycle user and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we have roads for cycle users.

The statement refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes. Roads and users are also plural here because the sentence refers to more than one road and more than one user.

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country because we have. Road for recycle for cycle user and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we have roads for cycle users.

The phrase after have is separated into incomplete fragments, so the thought is not expressed as a complete sentence. Connect the object directly to have, as in have roads for cycle users, and end the sentence there.